Thursday, September 22, 2011

Book...first draft..

"He's made his last mistake, its time he learns".
"No, you can't do this to her, you will ruin her life".
"Is there nothing you can do, you're just standing there, all these years and now you just stand there!"
"Once his new path has been decided, he can't protect him until I've carried out this judgement"
As much as the cool afternoon light across the living room came in through the window, the darkness seemed unaffected by it, by them.  Fall is a nice time of year to be outside since it's cooler but Kevin and Stacey had other plans, so did they.  They could only have sex in the living room because Stacey needed to hear when her mom's car pulled in the driveway.  Kevin certainly didn't mind, as he flashed the scene of him buying the condom that he's now wearing an hour ago at the pharmacy two blocks away.  Doggy style in the couch made Kevin feel like he was "the man" as if he could hear an applause from an audience.  But today, his audience was not clapping.  Ariel and Jamera stood along side Rashnu the angel of judgment.  Rashnu came to change Kevin's path in life, as a lesson for joining the area gang after his father passed last year.  Ariel, Stacey's guardian angel pleaded with Rashnu but she knew that Rashnu's presence and duty was irreversible.  Jamera could do nothing for Kevin.  He's saved him countless times and made sure his mother was always around right when he got himself in trouble, speaking through her, but not today.
The three stood side by side but with three different expressions.  The sad Ariel, the determined face of Rashnu and the loss of Jamera. "Is there nothing more to do?" asked Ariel.  "No" replied Rashnu as he stepped forward.  It was as if time slowed down as Ariel and Jamera lowered their heads.  Rashnu pushed his hand down through Stacey's back do to her loins and tore the condom that Kevin was wearing.  As Rashnu turned around you could see Kevin's face as he climaxed, proud that he could enjoy that feeling and knowing he was protecting himself.  Ariel and Jamera's heads were still lowered, one because they cannot intervene out of duty and second that they cannot witness when a life path is being altered.  Guardian Angels can only stop humans from destroying themselves but they cannot prevent the consequences of their actions.  "Ariel, she will have a girl, she will be a strong person, guard her well".  

2 comments:

Christina said...

Read it b4 but i love it...want to read on and on. Keep them coming cous!

Tammie said...

let's talk about this one.